Hey Kieran Nice work! Your rhythm and tempo was consistent. You used some simple chords creatively and I liked the way you added the change in dynamics (a quieter patch) towards the end of the song.
Keep working and sharing your talent. It will grow and maybe one day you will be our next NZ Idol! ;+)
Love your song - Is this the first time you have created something like this? You sound like a pro. I really like the dynamics you have within the song. Look forward to the next song. Mrs C
Nice on Kieran. It's good that you put a copyright on your song so no one feels they can just take it and call it there own.
ReplyDeleteThe yellow mike has much better sound quality. Next we should try the Singstar stereo mikes. Remind me tomorrow.
Allanah K
Hey Kieran
ReplyDeleteNice work! Your rhythm and tempo was consistent. You used some simple chords creatively and I liked the way you added the change in dynamics (a quieter patch) towards the end of the song.
Keep working and sharing your talent. It will grow and maybe one day you will be our next NZ Idol! ;+)
Fantastic effort, melody was really 'catchy', loved the instrumental...are you our next Dave Dobbyn?
ReplyDeleteWow what a fantastic song, your rhyming was great. I thought you used used your voice to good effect by changing the volume.
ReplyDeleteKeep at it, you could be a star!
Mr Wood
Love your song - Is this the first time you have created something like this? You sound like a pro. I really like the dynamics you have within the song. Look forward to the next song. Mrs C
ReplyDeleteI think you are very talented. I like your music and the lyrics. Keep thinking of the title. Who knows,you might be a famous singer one day!
ReplyDeleteJenny
Thank you for all your great comments i really like that
ReplyDeleteKieran
very nice (borat) from song
ReplyDeleteWow Kieran, that song you composed is a-ma-zing. You are so talented and have a fantastic voice to go with it. You will go far.... Jacqui (sam's mum)
ReplyDeletethank you for coming on my blog but a little tip don't put your last name a the internet and thank you again
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